Task
Watch the scene above performed by Jessica Alade and Louie Keen and make a note of everything you would want to change.
Think about how you would communicate your notes to your performers in a sensitive way. Try and avoid reading a line to an actor in the way you would like it to be said. Think about how you could word your note to help an actor discover the best delivery.
Read through Roberta’s notebook (below) and compare notes. Did you spot everything?